Surprise surprise. Hello again, persons who might be reading this.
So. Just got sick of myself, I guess, and opened this back up. This was a sortof collaboration between I and . Her original lineart, I fixed it, and then colored it. I got up to the stage of base colors about... maybe 5 or 6 months ago? I want to say I started this sometime in September or October, but I'm too lazy to turn on my computer and check.
LONG STORY SHORT. Got stuck/lost interest by the base colors, left it to collect dust until now. Attempted shading and highlighting. Didn't explode into an ugly mess of craptasticness, so continued on and colored the lines. Slap on a funky drugged background and there you go.
Characters are Eris and Adonis, twins and children of Kira's character Star, who I think died a while ago but I'm not sure. I don't keep up with such things.
I almost went on a rant of my current artistic status as of the now, but that's boring and I lost interest halfway through it. Lawl.
Critique PLZ. This picture was a bit rushed towards the end but I still want comments and tips and whatnot. Help is muchly appreciated.
Adonis + Eris belong to Artwork belongs to me.
kthxbai
P.S. This description is long and weird and I shouldn't be held responsible for any weirdness you may find in it if you read it because... well I should never be held responsible for most things I do, you have been warned.
P.S.S. The reason for such things as stated in above paragraph are probably the results of me being hyper at WHOA IT'S 4 IN THE AM?? I should go to bed.
P.S.S.S. Kira doesn't know I've been working on this. LAWL SURPRISE HAPPY EASTER!!! When is easter?
i'm so jealouse of your coloring skeelz and Kira's artwork... you guys make my carp (mispelled purposely) look like major doggy doo... *sighs* love the colors and how the outlines arent all just black. THe eyes are like ... lol Only thing i see that is different... is the hair... farther away it looks great zoomed in is doens't look As smooth as it could look (that's just me) but i know you said you rushed may/may not have been on the hair... another thing that is off to me... is the Adonis (if that's the guy) the chest... it looks fine in proportion and contour.. i just think the midchest line you drew is is centered correctly...but the V of the shirt's neck is drawn a lil off... maybe i'm just a lil picky and then lastly i think you could have spent an extra second on the girl's collar come on... her brother's shirt is all fancy smancy perfect jk
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lol well I remember you being picky about the background and you disliked the hair so now I say YAY! you did it, and next! Our pics! I'll color me later today, since I finished the outlines about 2 this morn. the chest on Adonis doesn't seem to have any shading on it, like maybe putting it right around the shirt collar edges, because he is technically standing a little bit away from the light, but other than that this looks really good, and I also agree with SKTAF on Eris' shirt collar, you just forget that?
Yay thanks for all the nice words but also the CRITIQUE AND TIPS I LOVE YOU. So. *serious business look* You are correct about the hair... that's one of the things I rushed on, also because I have loooow knowlege about shading/highlighting hair so I just "screw it" -ed on that part. Lol don't worry you're not picky. Now that you point it out to me his shirt bugs me too. >__< (And yes you're right that is Adonis ^^) Her collar... You mean how it's just got the base color and that's it? Eh heh. Ooops. Well, her brother is probably more concerned with his appearances... Maybe... Actually I don't know. *whisper* I'll just guess and say he is... >.> Lol anyways, thankkies again for the critique. ^.^
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YEAH HEAH WOOO!!! And I be almost done with our pics, like I've said... So if you're going to redo yourself, I'll wait for that from you, and then I need to figure out if I need to go ahead and color Dante or if Miranda's got a copy she colored (I'm pretty sure she does but... if I could persuade her, I'd like her to try to redo it >__> ) and then I'll be able to put them all together and finish what's missing from my part of it... The background... cause unless they made invisible floating trees in the future, I need to be sitting on SOMETHING my goodness.
And I asked SKTAF this question, but about Eris' collar, what do you mean, specifically? Because I personally see a lot of mistakes in that area....
Adonis' collar DID have some shading to it... before I covered it over with some highlights (what was the point of that???) but both shading and highlighting are too subtle to see unless you have it on full view and actually look at him so I epic fail -ed there. XP
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XD My gosh, this is quite a surprise. This turned out nice... but Adonis's smile is kind of creepy. :scared: XDD j/k, I'm not scared, just creeped out. Other than that, you know me, I can't seem to find that many flaws in your work sometimes. *note:most of the time*
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Well then. D: I suppose everyone's got a creepy pedotastic smile, now we've seen Adonis'. ........... o____O *weirded OUUUT*
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well you would just have to give it shading and highlights is all, and yeah i agree on the pic ordeal lol, but it might take longer for me to finish me than i thought cause I'm lazy and just can't find myself motivated to color or draw anything
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another thing that is off to me... is the Adonis (if that's the guy) the chest... it looks fine in proportion and contour.. i just think the midchest line you drew is is centered correctly...but the V of the shirt's neck is drawn a lil off... maybe i'm just a lil picky
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So. *serious business look* You are correct about the hair... that's one of the things I rushed on, also because I have loooow knowlege about shading/highlighting hair so I just "screw it" -ed on that part.
Lol don't worry you're not picky. Now that you point it out to me his shirt bugs me too. >__< (And yes you're right that is Adonis ^^)
Her collar... You mean how it's just got the base color and that's it? Eh heh. Ooops. Well, her brother is probably more concerned with his appearances... Maybe... Actually I don't know.
Lol anyways, thankkies again for the critique. ^.^
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That forever and a day,
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From now until the end of time
We'll be together, and you can be sure
That forever and a day,
That's how long we'll stay
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And I asked SKTAF this question, but about Eris' collar, what do you mean, specifically? Because I personally see a lot of mistakes in that area....
Adonis' collar DID have some shading to it... before I covered it over with some highlights (what was the point of that???) but both shading and highlighting are too subtle to see unless you have it on full view and actually look at him so I epic fail -ed there. XP
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